Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Editing

In this chapter you find that once you have a revised your essay, the next step is have a look again. This time you are not editing for voice, topics etc but for words, phrases, and sentences that are unclear or not suitable. You also need to look at spelling, usage, and grammatical errors. You have to make sure that the one who reads can completely understand what you are trying to say. Using of simple words with no double meanings .and chooses nouns and verbs with energy and vividness is a must. After all its better you make someone read you’re easy and see whiter he gets the thigh you want t or not. This chapter teaches you how to achieve that goal through editing your sentence structure, word choice and punctuation. The Editing and proofreading are the second step after revising to look for any errors and make your easy error free

Drafting

This chapter describes a draft as a way of getting things together like connecting ideas. We can even see or know the steps in which you plan out the essay structure and the main writing that occur while writing, in every essay you need to have the beginning, middle, and end. At the beginning it’s important to identify the topic and get to the point, at the middle you need to cover your main points, raise questions, build interest, and clarify your main point, at the end you need to be able to remind the reader of the purpose. Working through these steps helps you to find out what you want and what you are writing for, what you want it to say, and how you want it to be.

Planning

In this chapter it describes the steps in which you plan out the essay you are going to write. You need to maintain an organized pattern that you are going to follow throughout your essay. In this chapter you learn that you have to take a second look at your topic and do further research on it. You also need to take your general subject or topic and make it into a more specific focus. Throughout the planning process you need to ask yourself questions to make sure your writing reflects the topic, the details/ research support what you saying, and. In reading this chapter, here we can see that there are different ways you can plan your essay. You can use, basic lists, topic outlines, sentence outlines, or graphical organizers, which helps making easy good and organized.

Thursday, October 8, 2009

eassy


A Short Description about Me


I come from a land of deeply rooted cultures and traditions. Coupled with this, I attended one of the best Schools in Nepal and completed my higher secondary level from a convent school, St. Mary’s Higher Secondary school. This diverse background sets me apart from other students of Lincoln University.
Nepal, a country of diverse culture and tradition is where I call home. It is also known as the garden of 36 ethnicity and races since different people of different culture and tradition live together with the feeling of brotherhood in their heart. So, the qualities of adaptability and compatability naturally come to me because of the lessons I have learnt while growing up among a multicultural group of people.
Moreover, from my experience of attending a convent school, I acquired a lot of knowledge about Catholic traditions. At St. Mary’s school, I learnt about the way everyone should work together in harmony to acquire necessary knowledge, skills and the way we as good humans in the society have to live by our values. My family and St. Mary’s school introduced me to the spiritual knowledge.
Overall, I believe I’m smart and capable of doing everything that comes across me to fulfill my dreams and desires in future.